I'm writing this while listening and I'm pleasently surprised. The beginning is very atmospheric, very much unlike a lot of your atonal work. Really nice beginning. I love it when the middle section starts, with the percussion. I can feel the stress the two captains are feeling. Overall a very nice piece that sets a great mood. Write more pieces like this. I prefer these pieces a lot over your atonal work. This piece is original while being tonal. Keep up the good work!
EDIT: if you find the time, please take a look at my newest piece:
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