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You break some rules in terms of voice entrances and such. I don't think it affects the piece in any way, I just thought you might want to know.
Onto the music, I liked the piece a lot. I liked the theme, and I felt all the parts really fit well together. I especially liked your modulation around 21. But why did you make the viola so high in its entrance? I think you should have utilized its lower register as a contrast to the violin. I know you had to make it that high for technical reasons, but maybe change the entrances?
Just a note, if the tempo slows down for only a few measures just use a rit. An actually tempo marking is usually used for longer sections.
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