hi katchum,
I think your piece is very nice in melody and harmony and I do really like the last part and the ending. But sometimes you can't really hear all what's happening in your piece as the quality of the mp3 isn't that perfect

. And I don't know the format of the file you atatched. Any chance you can post the score that everyone can read it or that I can open it with Sibelius? (or maybe a midi-file)
I think I could make a better review seeing the score
