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Old Feb 19 2008, 6:16 PM
AndrevHaren AndrevHaren is offline

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Originally Posted by Mike View Post
Looks pretty good. I would have personally brought out more of the woodwinds in the sections where it's just the oboe competing against the brass (e.g. bars 19-22).

Also, try having the string players use some double stops in the louder bits, especially when there's a tutti going on.
Thanks. I added the oboe because I wanted to have a very intense melody. The idea was to give to trumpet some extra sharpness, not to set the oboe apart as solo instrument. Probably the oboe will not even be heard but the color will be different of both instruments together.

And doubles in the strings sounds like a good idea, i will try it out.

André
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