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SimenN: Without a doubt, you have an excellent orchestrative, creative, and lyrical talent. Both your piano concertos seem to have a very authentic baroque flow to them. There is almost nothing negative to say about this movement.
The few negative things: Section from 4:00 to 4:20 was harmonically poorly constructed. In some sections, the dissonances caused by counterpoint served to relax tension.
Good piece. You have a real ability.
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