Thread: Sketch EP
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Old Feb 23 2008, 5:50 PM
nhomas nhomas is offline

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For starters, you should consider putting your music on a site that will allow streaming; ACIDplanet, archive.org, etc. You'll get more reviews that way, by minimizing the effort required to listen to the music.

Intro: Fantastic vibe here. Great sounds. Nice, subtle development. However, just a little on the slow side. I wouldn't call it boring, but it's dangerously close.

Leaking Ear: Lots of interesting layering going on here. Again, great sounds. However, I feel like the piece drags on far too long with not enough development. Though there's a lot of stuff happening, the music doesn't ever venture far from its starting point until the very end; it has a rather static feel to it.

Bug Tea: This one avoids the static feel of Leaking Ear completely; it has a strong sense of development.

Vinyl Fireworks: This is a cool piece. Probably my favorite.

Ralf: I felt like this track would have been better if you had returned to the opening material before the end; it would have given it a better sense of wholeness. As it is, it just feels like two tracks stuck together.
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