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Aside from score problems, I really enjoyed this piece. I like the melodies and harmonies, especially the wacky key changes that pop up. As a whole, it's a bit repetitive, I think the main theme comes back too often. Maybe you could replace some repetitions of the main theme with an additional theme? Maybe contrasting.
Good piece!
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In Progress:
1. Drift, for orchestra
2. Chamber Symphony, for 17 players
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