Whoa!
*is blown backwards out of chair*
That was nice, immediate improvement! The brass actually sound like something now. Thankee!
Boy, that trumpet parts sounds fun.... that hectic one towards the end.
I still adore the chimes.
Come to think of it.... if you REALLY wanted, I suppose you could add a recap. or sorts... you would have to make some changes, though. It might just work though, if you want it to.