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I liked a good majority of it, my favorite parts are when you have the piano imitate the singer. I enjoy stuff like that, I only wish you had done more of it!
I do have some qualms with the repeated notes in the melody. You did it fairly often, and it got dull pretty quickly. Maybe you would consider moving the melody a bit more. Then again I am going with the yucky midi, so perhaps a better rendering/live performance would make me change my mind.
I do have to say it is enjoyable, and you fit the words well (like the dammed would make no noise section).
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