I liked it, but how Nick said, its more a "put together" of cool things other composers did before you than a really good composed new track. The Scoresheet i really crappy to read while listening to it.
I would prefere a much stronger Theme wich could lead that piece but its not so strong to lead. Its more a 2nd Theme that the Major. Some Parts are well notated, but in that piece is really no own style, much was taken from others (not plagiate! but stylisch) and thats what i am missing in so much case of Composers today, there own "color".
But well, what don't is yet can become
so keep composing!