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I really like the piece overall. It would help if I had a score to follow to see some of the stuff, but just some general comments.
At 2:35 where it goes minor and tremolo occours in the Basses, maybe crescendo them up until the Violin comes in and decrescendo them out at like 2:48.
The tension building at approx. 8:30 is phenomenal, but it drops off at 8:45. It needs to go somewhere.
The Flute drops out at 9:50. Crescendo them and get the strings to match the volume when they take over where the Flute leaves.
I love the swell at the end.
Overall its really REALLY good. The stuff that I mentioned is just what I would do. Its amazing as is though.
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