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Old Mar 7 2008, 5:31 PM
MatthewSchwartz MatthewSchwartz is offline

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Originally Posted by manossg View Post
I just listened to all of it.

1. You should check your notation. It's very...inappropriate!
2. Do you have a rock background?
3. Some drum parts are very annoying...
4. I liked very much parts VII, XI!

Overall, very enjoyable but in need of some attention...

Thumbs up!
Hey, thanks for the feedback!

1. Yeah, you're definitely right there. For one thing, the instrumentation labeling is completely off, since I used the GPO samples rather than the standard Finale patches. As for the notation itself, I'm admittedly not aware of the physical nuances of all the specific instruments, though I am pretty sure that all the proper ranges have been maintained.

2. Yeah, it's pretty obvious, innit? XD

3. Yeah, I definitely need to completely reorchestrate either the percussion or the non-percussive music of darkness at noon. And the percussion of "Sir, I exist!" sounds too hollow and needs more bass depth.

4. Oooh I'm surprised you liked XI. o.O

Most people generally like it, though one person pointed out that it can kind of throw the listener off, considering the music that precedes it.

Again, thanks for the comments. =]
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