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I enjoyed most of your piece, and I like the ideas you have, but I feel that the middle section gets a bit boring, and the piece only really regains energy close to the end. Some variation in melody and/or tempo would greatly improve the middle section.
Good work
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Bllllaaaaarhhh!!!!!.
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Melody for Trombone and Piano
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Originally Posted by Berlioz
MY EYES!!!
They're BLEEDING!!! AND MELTING!!! AND...
ARRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !
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