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Originally Posted by maelstromtempest
I'll suggest two things:
1.) Since this piece is called "Thoughts" you can keep it like this to convey the feeling of shifting thoughts
2.) Have a really strong statement of the theme so that the whole piece can tie in with itself.
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Thank you very much.
No.1 is actually the way my thoughts seem to work, but I understand that frequent changes do sometimes sound a bit... stange.
I think I will leave this as it is for now, but I will keep the fleuncy thing in mind for my next piece.
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Originally Posted by rolifer
This is a very simple piece and would be good as an etude for a intermediate student. You have some real nice dynamics in the piece and some nice tempo changes as well, all of which will help to hone the skills of the player.
Ron
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Thank you. I wrote this piece to suite my skill level, as I have only taken up piano as a second instrument recently.
