Hey Mike!
Really interesting stuff in here, and it shows that you actually know music, apart from adding loops together.
the weird lines, the fat bass lines, the harmonies clashing together a bit, all work out very well.
Indeed, as Marius says the different 'movements' of the piece come in a bit suddently but still they work extremely well and it is a hellishly interesting track! If you have the project, just make a tutorial. I'm sure that people will appreciate it for what it is: A fantastic piece of music, with great imagination!
Well done Mike!