I definitely liked it in general. Excellent use of the pit. I'd have to agree with jada that the tonal center is a little stagnant. It seems a little short even for a field show movement, mabye throw in a contrasting section to break up all the A minor and give it a little more length. I also think the ending might be better if you ended it on a nice big chord as opposed to the unison. All of the rising scales in the mallets seem to be building up to something, but it just isn't there. Much better than I could do over-all though.
