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Greets, virtualshock,
Nice work you've done there! I liked especially the part with the seconds (I'm such a sucker for seconds...)!
I felt it needed some more variation to maintain interest, as it was very long and slow.
Also, the violin part could have been a bit more imaginative. I understand you want to give a 'minimal' feel, but the part after m.95 could have worked perfectly.
You also have a nice score. But it has a lot of notational errors.
Overall, an enjoyable attempt!
Cheers!
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