Originally Posted by manossg

Greets, virtualshock,

Nice work you've done there! I liked especially the part with the seconds (I'm such a sucker for seconds...)!

I felt it needed some more variation to maintain interest, as it was very long and slow.

Also, the violin part could have been a bit more imaginative. I understand you want to give a 'minimal' feel, but the part after m.95 could have worked perfectly.

You also have a nice score. But it has a lot of notational errors.

Overall, an enjoyable attempt!

Cheers!

Originally Posted by manossg

the part after m.95 could have worked perfectly.