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Hmmmm you seem like a pretty good pianist with decent composing skills too (above me anyhow). To be honest, I don't even know exactly what Phrygian mode is - some kind of variation on a minor scale I'd guess. But I really do like this piece by you - lots of harmonic and stylistic variation. If I can make one suggestion it would be with the "main" theme that I could pick out (the medium-speed one with broken chords in the left hand that begins after the intro). The melody and choice of harmony is great - but I thought that the timing of your chord changes was a bit predictable. ie - each chord change seemed to fall on an exact beat which made the left hand in this section sound relatively boring (compared with most other stuff in the rest of the piece that is). Overall though I really like this one - especially the section with the melody in the left hand and also the flowing runs in the right hand during the main theme. By the way, was it really necessary to add the final 2 chords at the end?
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