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It's pretty, but that's A LOT of C major. The piece would be a lot more effective with some chromaticism just for the sake of color, and there is so much more you could do with the flute part. If you aren't yet familiar with it, check out Debussy's Syrinx, you should be able to find a pdf of it on Google, and there are plenty of performances on YouTube (I suggest James Galway). How long have you been writing?
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