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Old Mar 22 2008, 8:57 PM
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I DON'T want 3 parts yet!
(from what you have posted: avoid the bass and soprano always having the same rhythm. The Db in the melody could work with an F in the bass, in this type of harmony. The bass you have there is not good.)
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