Hey guys
This is the demo i did for ABSteel's musical. The story is thus: a girl is woken up with the news her lover is here to run away with her, so she jumps out of bed in excitement before the realisation sets in that she is leaving home forever.
This is a very important piece to me as it's my first one that I actually need to have a printed score for eventually. So this is where I'd really like some help. I've provided both a link to the Sibelius recording and the score.
Basically I'm happy with the recording at the moment, and I need to know anything that would need to be changed in the score in order for it to be performed as you hear in the recording. Any help appreciated but the more detail you can go into the better, as I really need to learn quickly when it comes to proper scoring.
The vocal line in the recording is played by an alto flute, comments and suggestions on the whole thing much appreciated.
Edit: Oh, this piece is intended for a soprano, and I know my choice of an alto flute to represent that was a bit stupid, so that will be one thing I rectify along with anything else you guys see!
Edit 2: Updated score now attached
http://www.fox-music.co.uk/Bitterswe...export%205.mp3