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This isn't bad. The horn fanfare/intro was very nice and I like the deep string sound, but some of the notes were obscured due to the bass's timbre in the low register. I really like the use of each instrument. The melody and harmony is very flowing and beautiful. I particulary like the fact that no instrument seemed to be ignored. There are places where long notes are being held where some rythmic interest in the background can be created. It seems like the softest this piece gets is mf, can there be a little more dynamic variation, please? I also like the fact that this piece is coherent. Where did you get your samples? Mine are horrible. OMG the ending. It is too abrupt for the preceding majesty. Mabye you should extend the chords and use an extended PAC. i V i V i V i. something like that.
good job.
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Favorite composers: Beethoven, Schubert, Mendelssohn, Bach, Schumann
Playable instruments: Saxophones, Violin, Clarinet, Piano
Favorite pieces: Mendelssohn Symphony 1------------------------------------ 
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