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Old Mar 28 2008, 11:47 PM
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Hi Ferret.
Hmmm, I don't really know what to compare this song to. The drum beat makes it sound a bit like 80s music such as Depeche Mode or New Order. I like the section with piano (up to about bar 68) - thought that sounded good. The guitar solo was ok, but I didn't really like the GGGGGD figure you introduce at bar 72. Thought it sounded a bit annoying and repetitive. I thought there should be more/louder drums in this section. Not sure about the ending either.... I think maybe you could shorten it a lot after the drums cut out (maybe down to even just 1-2 bars). Hope that helps
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