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My biggest criticism of this song is the simplicity of the drum part. You could have done a lot more with the drums. First of all, try to switch up the rhythm from time to time. Even if its just in drum fills, it will help, believe me. Also, drummers can hit more than one thing at a time. Just try to make the drums more interesting is all.
Also, as previously mentioned the GGGGGD theme is rather repetitive and could use some variation. Sections like that are great for "conversations" between instruments, with one instrument taking the lead while the other plays the theme and then vice-versa. You seem to understand this concept but didn't take it far enough in my opinion.
Hope I helped.
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