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Originally Posted by maelstromtempest
Nice intro. Interesting change at :23. It doesn't feel like a minuet until :45. I am confused as to why you didn't end the piece with an authentic cadence. It doesn't seem finished.
Yeah... it doesn't seem like a minuet until the :45 section.
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What do you mean when you say "feel like a minuet?"
What makes a minuet a minuet is the form, not the feeling. I didn't end it with an authentic cadence just because that's the sound I wanted.
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Hey voce.
Ok so I liked the piece, it was nice. Nice harmony and what not, but I felt like it started to abruptly. Also you had such great motion in the beginning, and then you took it away and it didn't really come back. I just want to that motion explored and developed that.
It would be nice if you kinda keep the motion going because it was really great!!
I hate to give a kind of bad review, bit I just wanted to share that.
Keep up the good work!!
Scott.
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Thx lol
I kind of felt like that too.