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I liked the contrast between the two ideas in your piece. They are both quite striking themes and have a certain remoteness suggestive of Iceland ( sorry Icelanders). I thought you probably could have done a bit more with these themes. In particular the piece needs a couple of transition sections. You present your two ideas and close on the tonic. Then you repeat variations of the two ideas and stop. The effect is that your piece sounds like a sketch for the finished product. Great ideas but they need development into a unified piece.
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