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Er, May I be accorded the honor to point out some matters in your piece.
As according to ur midi.... There are quite a few dissonances that aint resolved. Just sounds wrong to my common period ear, but well.
Also, there seems to be not much of melodic material in it... as in, IMO, the melodies are not that pronounced, and they are covered up by the over-harmonization.
But on the whole, allow me to conclude, maybe I am not too savy a music intelectual critic whatever, and am not really capable of appreciating the complicated harmonies u have put in. However, good work! =)
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