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hey finrod!
Imo, this is quite a nice piece, but I do think u have some chords that are very dissonant? =P (some augmented chords here and there)
Oh and the accompaniment sounds er, very pop-ish. Also, it is not really a march.. more like a lone journey of sorts. Reminiscent of jewish er... melodies.
on the whole, its a great piece of work!
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