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sorry I'm late on this, but a few things: div? in how many? how? your divisi sections are confused and confusing. the voices go from 1 to 2 to 4, but with no indication of which desks are to be playing which parts.
and hate to break it to ya, but cellos don't read in alto clef.
also, bass in pizz? just write "pizz" at the first notes of the bass part. the little "pizz throughout" indication is... umm... cheesy.
cutting it awful close, no? posting today for something that is due today?
what if there had been major problems with the score? would you have had time to fix them? would it have mattered?
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