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Old Mar 31 2008, 6:45 PM
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Wow this is beautiful!

I loved the middle section, and I think the self inflicted hair loss was definately worth that superb ending!

If i may say one thing, There was a point about a third of the way through the piece that began to get slightly repetetive, but thats just a personal opinion.

Beautiful!
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