Mael,
im not the best with form, so i cant comment on how it is as a sonata, but i can comment on the music. i listened to the first movement, very beethovenesque, which is a good thing because i love his style. at parts i heard inspirations from moonlight sonata 3rd movement (bar 70-ish to 90-ish...ill dig deeper into the score later), very powerful work here. i thought the second (or was it third) theme was a little weak, maybe vary up the eighth note rhythm a bit. overall though it did have a thrilling impact on me, and it is definitly FAR from bad. when you told me it was bad i was expecting musical garbage all over the place, but it is obviously not the case as you have good sense of structure and music ability. the only things i didnt like were as i said the rhythm of the second theme, and in the beginning measures it seemed a little random, as though you were trying to present all this material at once and then develop it from there. these are just minor issues and like i said im not the best critiquer or the best with sonata form...thats just what i got from it.
cheers mate and keep writing
