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Old Apr 2 2008, 6:27 PM
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Beautiful work. I was hooked right from the first motive.

If I were to be ultra critical, I'd question the use of Gb as opposed to G natural in the descending flute melody at 0:21 - my ear found it to be slightly out of place given the material that precedes it. This effect could of course be deliberate, however, and I don't mean to present anything other than a personal take in making this comment.

Aside from that, it's a lovely piece with some great sonorities and melodic ideas on show. As Lee says above, it's generally of a high enough calibre to stand up to scrutiny in the professional sphere, which is certainly something to be proud of.

Thanks for sharing!
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