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In tide rising, (and this is a quick fix), I would try to rework it so that the accent (beat one) isn't on the word "the" in the phrase "and the tide rises." Otherwise, the way the beats worked with the words seemed pretty good.
Also, in Gloria, why did you use dotted slurs rather than ties?
Otherwise, very pleasant to listen to.
Last edited by Dan Gilbert : Apr 5 2008 at 10:48 PM.
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