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Hello Manos!
I agree with Nikolas' comments on your piece. I enjoyed your piece's melodic material, but I'd like to hear a more complex elaboration of it. As it is, it does share a resemblance with some minimalistic works, notably because of the more or less steady harmonic rhythm and the limited alterations of the theme. The only thing that I didn't like was the bridge in m. 38 - 42. It sounded very abrupt and alien to what preceded and what followed it to me...
Alexandros
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