it's sweet.
you could try varying the harmonies instead of using the same sequence of chords through all the song. only if you feel appropiate, though.
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in my opinion, including so many common mistake in Music
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is it your opinion or your guess? if you feel it has something wrong, work on it until you feel it's fine. if you only guess that it should have some mistakes because you lack expereince/knowledge - it's ok, just continue composing and you'll improve. listen to the music you like and try to see what exactly you like about it, and maybe what your own lacks in that respect.