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Originally Posted by Michael_Rybak
it's sweet.
you could try varying the harmonies instead of using the same sequence of chords through all the song. only if you feel appropiate, though.
is it your opinion or your guess? if you feel it has something wrong, work on it until you feel it's fine. if you only guess that it should have some mistakes because you lack experience/knowledge - it's ok, just continue composing and you'll improve. listen to the music you like and try to see what exactly you like about it, and maybe what your own lacks in that respect.
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Firstly, thank you so much for your opinion. I'll try my best to improve, especially to compose with a variety of harmonies, that helps !
However, I think the mistakes were on the rhythm, the recording mistake, ok well , i will make it more appealing.
Again, thanks
