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This is an interesting piece, although there are some things that I feel could have been done better with it. The slow section in the first movement still interrupts the faster part. You have to make a transition into that, you shouldn't just speed it up and expect it to work. Harmoniesa are pretty predictable, too, I think you could have changed it up a little.
I like the frenetic pace of the first movement, and how the thirds throughout seem to tie it together. It has a nice, broad sound in many parts that gives it a sense of brevity. Nice work overall.
The third movement is my favorite, and it seems to draw some from the first. Whether or not that was your intention, I don't know, but that was the impression I got. The rhythm seems to skip around a little in some parts, and I don't know whther you did that on purpose or not. I think it makes it more interesting, and I like the way the first and the third movements tie together.
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