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Originally Posted by Daniel
I realise there are some bits which aren't totally enjoyable - the A flats in b.21 are harsh, but I believe necessary. Also, there are some bits which aren't yet as good as they should be - b.106-113 isn't quite right.
Thanks for listening though.
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I'm not quite sure why you find the A flats at measure 21 "harsh".
They seem "right" to me.
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