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Old Apr 11 2008, 8:19 AM
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it might be a typo, but a quick correction is in order: it's "Prêtresse".


a few notation issues: in measures 2-4, 10-11, 16-17, 19-20, and again in 37, and 43-45, you have stems in the wrong direction in the upper staff, which is causing beam colissions between the upper layer notes and the cross-staffed notes.

You should also check, there are some spots, like measure 31, where the stems are in the wrong direction.
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