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Old Apr 11 2008, 7:01 PM
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Hey Hubert,

It's a nice piece indeed. Although i did find it a bit to sequencial, a bit to little "telling something" for my taste. It's hard to play i'd recon but it obviously isn't impossible. Maybe you could add a part with a more obvious melody, so this could be the middle/development section. It misses a real caracter, but then again that's something i prefer in music. You have great composing abilities though, that's obvious.
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