OK, after awhile (sorry, I have been quite busy lately with schoolwork and such), I have finally finished more-or-less editing the second movement. The program notes are near the beginning of the thread.
I know there a lot of collisions in the score. I tried to remove as many as I could, but some of them were simply unavoidable due to the size of the page. My apologies!
Sound:
II. The Winged Creatures of the Cytillan Plain NEW.mp3
Score:
II. The Winged Creatures of the Cytillan Plain PDF.pdf
Enjoy!
Oh, by the way, thanks to everyone who commented on the 1st movement! I'll definitely re-write it in 4/4 time, or maybe have some of the instruments in 4/4 while others are in 12/8 (in order to avoid nested-triplet rhythms and such).
I may also work with the file in Audacity to see if I can get it to be louder.