starlady174

Well, the title lured me in and I must say I'm glad it did. This piece was extremely interesting... certainly ugly at times, but I think that worked for it. I loved the dramatic mood you set. Here are some (I hope helpful?) criticisms that might help future performances of the piece. The beginning seemed rushed at times (this might be intentional or maybe just happened in the process of improvising) but I still liked the general idea very much. And again, the transition around 2:05 came off as a little sloppy, but in a sense that added to the violent, chaotic feeling of that part. Overall though, it was really well done. I'd love to hear your other works.