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Old Apr 15 2008, 6:22 PM
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OK I have to ask...where was the glockenspiel in that!?!

It was a pretty good piece though for what it was. I would say that it is a little repetitive though, you don't really vary the melody at all which I think it needs, and your harmonies are a bit predictable. Maybe experiment with them a little bit to make the piece more intersting.

I'm just nitpicking here though, so on the whole a nice piece! And welcome the the forums as well.
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