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Nice ideas going on here:
In the Gloria, you have some nice ideas of texture, but I dont know if they were right for this piece. It sounded a little dark to be for Glory to God in the Highest. Also I agree with others about the mixing of the latin and english. As a singer looking at it, its confusing.
For the tides, I liked the main motif. Overall it was a very nice piece. Some Variation in the second stanza might be nice. It was to static for that one idea.
Keep up the work.
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