Thread: Symphony No. 1: Allegro non troppo, ma misterioso
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Old Apr 15 2008, 9:54 PM
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I LOVE your instrumentation. But... as Maelstromtempest has already mentioned, the movement lacks a well established theme(s). Work on developing strong themes, and this will truly be impressive! Keep it up!
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