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1st issue is that Viola is written in alto clef, not bass clef.
There are a few chords in the opening piano solo that are a bit on the "wide" side... playable if you arpeggiate them, otherwise, not playable.
Do NOT use the "octava bassa" bass clef in a piano part. Either use lots of ledger lines, or use the smartshape "octava bassa" line.
A notation programme issue arises: why are your arpeggiato symbols above the notes? (notably in the cello part)
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