|
At first I thought that this was my thread, since I also did a setting of Heart We Will Forget Him! It's interesting to see the differences in the music between our settings.
I know you were trying for something with the rests, but I don't think it worked. The piece felt like it was stopping and starting too much, no flow. Also, there seemed to be little connection between the sections. They didn't even contrast that much.
My biggest problem is that you added words that are not in the poem originally. I don't know where you got your version of the poem, but there is no "Oh, heart my heart".
|