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I enjoyed this piece. I really enjoyed the slow part. This really felt like a band piece and would be fun to play. One sugestion, the transition from the slow movement and back again seems too abrupt. It was like cuising down the free way and then suddenly hitting a block wall. I think if you expanded the transitions alittle more making it gradual, not just in tempo but in dynamics, etc. I think it would sound better.
Keep up the good work.
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