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Good job. I would delve into there being way too much Bb, but you haven't studied theory that in depth, in which case I'm very impressed. Especially with the slower secton. Part of that is Finale too, the sample library on that program is pretty incredible now. Alas I am a Sibelius 3 user, so I get old sample libraries but [real] people can read my scores :-p Anyway, good job with your first complete piece. Now I think it's time for you to step back and work with a much smaller group of instruments to hone your control over your music.
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